What do you think of the beginning of my story?

I really like it. Very descriptive writing style that captures the reader. It flows nicely. What I would recommend from experience, and this is just a personal opinion, but I find when I write, the beginings are always great, but as you go through it, it changes. If you are wanting to continue writing this, and I think you should, I would suggest making a ruff outline to give your story some drive. The descriptive scenes are amazing in the begining, but make sure you are able to keep that up throughout your story. I enjoyed reading that. Hope you post more :-)